2022高考跳跃复习：高考英语短文改错秘诀

七. 逻辑学偏差需重视

与音节的上、下文不都与反，甚至都与矛盾，同属逻辑学性偏差。如专指上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、短时间、方位等总体的偏差，经常是这类偏差的考察对象。例如：

The Smiths did hisbest to make me feel at home. （their）

First, let me tell you something moreabout myself. （替换more）

… no way of setting the matter except by selling the set. Now someoneat home reads instead. （everyone）

上述第一例中会的；大语是Smiths（克拉克夫妇俩），因此前头的his只不过学。第二例中会的more在这儿所列“于是又”的意思，才开始告知别人，怎么能说“于是又告知你一些事情”？第三例讲的是为了彻底解决看电视时的意见分歧，“我们”把电视机卖了；晚上没电视看了，所以与那时候一样，大家又都读书了，所以该用 everyone。

除了上述偏差一般来说内外，经常考的偏差菱形式还有：片语but, and, or和so的该词偏差（可以视都以为逻辑学偏差），以及前缀的该词偏差等。例如：

She was smiling butnodding at me. （and）

It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor anda guest. （or）

We may be one family and live under asame roof.（the）

真题巩固

上面是全省录取英语真题中会的短诗改错题。这道题较全面地突显了本文的注解。今天试着来作一来作，然后详见题后的回答与类比。

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.

回答与类比：

1. famous前以致于a.（词总共）

2. 正确

3. we在后沙when，为了让一个短时间前缀从句。（音节组分多分析方法）

4. them→us （逻辑学偏差需重视）

5. visiting→visited（非谓介词粗对应）

6. picture→pictures（词总共）

7. passes→passed（介词菱形）

8. 替换down（；也该词要记下）

9. and→but（逻辑学偏差需重视）

10. 替换at（音节组分多分析方法 / ；也该词要记下

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